"the Timelord [Please diagnose Deck]" Deck 2017

Playing

This is my first post. I'm building the Timelord Deck, but I'm having trouble building it, so he posted it asking for a deck diagnosis.
We are waiting for your opinion, such as you don't need this card or recommend this card.
I don't mind if it's a replacement opinion. thank you.

Strength

・I tried to use the fact that it is not destroyed, so I put in a torrent burial and a black hole.
・Assuming that Shizukiel will be on the opponent's field and after returning it to your field with Mind Control, you can connect it to a rank 10 Xyz. [Extras are also being considered. As candidates, I'm thinking of Gustav Max, Star Dragon, etc. ]
・Since the Timelord's effect will return him to the deck, several draw sources are included.
In order to use the effect of 《Time Maiden》, we have included 《Foolish Burial》and one-for-one.

Weakness

・There are many cases where 《Time Maiden》does not come to your hand due to lack of search means.
・There is a danger that your opponent will be able to do almost nothing and be locked in his deck that generates tokens and monsters on this field. If you have a special effect on self-destruction, you can deal with it, but there is a possibility that LP will make a big difference.
・ This may be true for the Timelord Deck in general, but it lacks deployment power and is uneasy in terms of defense.
・It can be easily stopped by 《Skill Drain》or Effect Veiler, and the turn ends as it is.

Customize

At first, I was using One-chan and Kinka-daki, but there were many accidents such as there were no level 1 monsters on the field, and there were no 《Time Maiden》in GY. However, if it is a minority recruitment, it may be used. In that case, it is necessary to increase GY manure such as 《Mathematician》.